I like the bottom two, but I the one with the numbers is my favorite. I like how you kept it simple and show the similarity in the big curving parts. The only thing about it that I'd suggest changing is the color of the "high contrasting widths." Granted I'm a little "color dyslexic" but it seems a little hard to read to me. Maybe it's just the screen though.
YO Becky Lou. I like the all of them of course, I have already told you this but if I HAD to rank them it goes 3,2,1. I think the number one is very chic and I realllly like the colors...margie would be so proud. It shows a lot of information by showing all the numbers without having to use a lot of words. The middle one I think is very you, I like the green with black and white as well as the way you created a bubble around the text. The top one is good as well it is just very straight forward, here is the info. Maybe it is because the page is divided by the lines and it is just very different from your other ones. Well, that's all folks :)
I really really like the composition on that third poster. Especially that red circle peaking through the 4. I'm actually jealous. Of course I'd make everything light gray/black/red in this world if I could, but your colors look very good. And all the white space makes it look more refined. The only suggestion (and this is just me wishing I had those files to test more things out) is to try a very subtle debossing effect on that 4 just to see what it looks like. Then again, it already looks wonderful as is. Great job!
All of your posters are well executed. the first one I would say is my least favorite (although still good). the colors of the second one is what makes it stand out; but by far the third is the winner. The composition of the numbers looks fantastic. the purple circle in the four is what brought the whole thing in for me; very clever. I also like the numbers on the bottom, with a time line feel. They are in a very structured pattern with 4 and 7 making a logo; great contrast! well done!
Yeah definitely agree, the third poster is awesome. I like how you kept it simple but the composition is still really strong. The reddish dot in the middle is a good focal point. I like the limited palette on the second one, the green has such strong "chroma" so it works well being used for the guides!
I think the last 2 posters are the most interesting. My favorite is the second one because it's the most clear on the parts of the letter you are focusing on. The third was has nice simplicity. To make the second one more successful, I would change the colors so not all the letters are white and not all the circles are green. Good work you devil
I like the bottom two, but I the one with the numbers is my favorite. I like how you kept it simple and show the similarity in the big curving parts. The only thing about it that I'd suggest changing is the color of the "high contrasting widths." Granted I'm a little "color dyslexic" but it seems a little hard to read to me. Maybe it's just the screen though.
ReplyDeleteYO Becky Lou. I like the all of them of course, I have already told you this but if I HAD to rank them it goes 3,2,1. I think the number one is very chic and I realllly like the colors...margie would be so proud. It shows a lot of information by showing all the numbers without having to use a lot of words. The middle one I think is very you, I like the green with black and white as well as the way you created a bubble around the text. The top one is good as well it is just very straight forward, here is the info. Maybe it is because the page is divided by the lines and it is just very different from your other ones. Well, that's all folks :)
ReplyDeleteI really really like the composition on that third poster. Especially that red circle peaking through the 4. I'm actually jealous. Of course I'd make everything light gray/black/red in this world if I could, but your colors look very good. And all the white space makes it look more refined. The only suggestion (and this is just me wishing I had those files to test more things out) is to try a very subtle debossing effect on that 4 just to see what it looks like. Then again, it already looks wonderful as is. Great job!
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All of your posters are well executed. the first one I would say is my least favorite (although still good). the colors of the second one is what makes it stand out; but by far the third is the winner. The composition of the numbers looks fantastic. the purple circle in the four is what brought the whole thing in for me; very clever. I also like the numbers on the bottom, with a time line feel. They are in a very structured pattern with 4 and 7 making a logo; great contrast! well done!
ReplyDeleteYeah definitely agree, the third poster is awesome. I like how you kept it simple but the composition is still really strong. The reddish dot in the middle is a good focal point. I like the limited palette on the second one, the green has such strong "chroma" so it works well being used for the guides!
ReplyDeleteI think the last 2 posters are the most interesting. My favorite is the second one because it's the most clear on the parts of the letter you are focusing on. The third was has nice simplicity. To make the second one more successful, I would change the colors so not all the letters are white and not all the circles are green. Good work you devil
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